The long lunch queue was abuzz
The long lunch queue was abuzz with faces that thanks to ears at the extremes held laughters from reaching 360 degrees. And talk... endless chatter of gossips vying with rattles of ladles on porcelains; and hands reaching for forks and spoons at the end of the food chain. Lunch Time at Mensa. Students and professors and poseurs and associates - all gathering as a matter of routine - at the same time. The very epitome of university life.
"Deeeeee..." a hail from somewhere behind the queue of plates hit his ear at mid-pitch. Knowing the voice, without turning to see, he just raised his right hand in a gesture of recognition. Not much interested in stepping out of line or feeling like returning the favour in decibels, the man addressed as Dee murmured something inchoate to himself, getting irritated with the agonizing snailing towards the goulash counter. Goulash and mashed potatoes and a serving of frikadelle at extra cost. And the mustard paste packaged by some dumb, across the Atlantic Pond company that you had to pay for. Everything these days cost money. Earlier it was different. You just had to flash your student identity and the coupons could be picked once a week or fortnight or monthly as you wished to retain them. The menu has not changed, only the pattern of service. And the gas cost so much that one stayed back to catch lunch at the canteen rather than drive back to the apartment. He was one of the several students who were finding the "openness" a little alarming. Education still is free. One just had to pay a basic student union assurance. But the course materials cost a fortune for those who are not used to paying. Still, life is not without its positives. One at least can work up finances if one had the will and desperation and attitude towards it.
The queue had reached him to the counter. "Mahlzeit!" The voice from the other side of the counter wished. "Uh... hunh? Bit more sauce please..." An amused and condescending cackle from the other side of the counter, as the ladle showered the mash with its blessings of brackish brown sauce emblazoned in dull kidney beans. Sigh...ing, he moved away from the railing and towards an empty table.
"Mind if I joined, Dirk?", a very nasal voice, sounding un-English, un-American but standard, eased itself on the opposite chair without waiting for an answer. By now being used to this pattern of politeness that did not expect an answer Dee, whose expansion has now been authenticated, spread a warm smile and extended the open palm to accept a friendly embedding of the other hand that pressed gently palm down, "Heeeey... managed to make it yourself?". The visitor smiled a row of unorderly lower row, eased the mandatory mashed potato and some agglomeration of vegetables and salads and vinegar soaked beans accrued on the plate, with the right hand while carefully placing the paper tissue and the fork to the left of him. "Yes, Need for Food! Can't keep the taste buds under suppression for long." He said it matter of fact. "If you could call a plate full of leaves a treat for your taste buds, you're entitled to your feelings," chuckled Dirk in a wry sort of way, the visitor couldn't quite comprehend whether to consider it a joke and return the compliment with another flash of lower row or to say something to keep the conversation going. "But yoooou know, it's good. For you to discover the campus. Even if it means you need to hop across two intersections for this measly meal. I mean, rather than going to that basement cafeteria and brushing shoulders with the older lot of professors with borrowed Queen's English. You feel life here. How would you compare?"
"Ummm... naat musch difffferance", mouth full of potato slush and one little strand of sprout beans hanging, making desperate efforts to snake into the esophagal avenue towards the digestive innards of his mid-torso. Gulp... three-second pause of voice, accentuated with gestures and movement of left fingers to explain that it was difficult to think with food in mouth... clearance, "...actually, the food is same. But yes, it's a lot more warm here", and wondered if they both meant the same warmth. "Heeeey... Deee. Hi Canon, is the food treating you good?" the voice that had hailed Dirk from the back of the food chain a while back now settled down on the seat next to Dirk in the form of a gorgeous, even if slightly more round on the hips, E-cat, as Dirk affectionately called his girlfriend. Canon is how they had pronounced his name on the Round One of introductions as he had descended on the Teutonic soil, on the sunny but cold day in late September. Having a certain proclivity towards photography, he had mutely accepted his name-revision with a certain resigned candor that he prided himself as internal grandeur. E-cat is short for Ekaterina. As he mulled over nomenclatural predicaments in a university campus, D & E had quickly brushed their lips to acquaintance. That is something he was still coming to terms with. "Do you have your presentation this evening?" - Dirk.
"Naw! going to do window shopping at the mall. Going to leer and ogle at all those Aiwa Walkmans and try to beat the ascending steps of the escal..."
" 'k, join us at the 2nd Floor then? 6.30" E-cat suggested, afterwards looking at D for a late approval.
"Yeah!... yeah...!!" strained Dirk, perhaps taken unexpectedly by this invitation that must have ensued from him.
"What's up tonight?"
"Deeeeee..." a hail from somewhere behind the queue of plates hit his ear at mid-pitch. Knowing the voice, without turning to see, he just raised his right hand in a gesture of recognition. Not much interested in stepping out of line or feeling like returning the favour in decibels, the man addressed as Dee murmured something inchoate to himself, getting irritated with the agonizing snailing towards the goulash counter. Goulash and mashed potatoes and a serving of frikadelle at extra cost. And the mustard paste packaged by some dumb, across the Atlantic Pond company that you had to pay for. Everything these days cost money. Earlier it was different. You just had to flash your student identity and the coupons could be picked once a week or fortnight or monthly as you wished to retain them. The menu has not changed, only the pattern of service. And the gas cost so much that one stayed back to catch lunch at the canteen rather than drive back to the apartment. He was one of the several students who were finding the "openness" a little alarming. Education still is free. One just had to pay a basic student union assurance. But the course materials cost a fortune for those who are not used to paying. Still, life is not without its positives. One at least can work up finances if one had the will and desperation and attitude towards it.
The queue had reached him to the counter. "Mahlzeit!" The voice from the other side of the counter wished. "Uh... hunh? Bit more sauce please..." An amused and condescending cackle from the other side of the counter, as the ladle showered the mash with its blessings of brackish brown sauce emblazoned in dull kidney beans. Sigh...ing, he moved away from the railing and towards an empty table.
"Mind if I joined, Dirk?", a very nasal voice, sounding un-English, un-American but standard, eased itself on the opposite chair without waiting for an answer. By now being used to this pattern of politeness that did not expect an answer Dee, whose expansion has now been authenticated, spread a warm smile and extended the open palm to accept a friendly embedding of the other hand that pressed gently palm down, "Heeeey... managed to make it yourself?". The visitor smiled a row of unorderly lower row, eased the mandatory mashed potato and some agglomeration of vegetables and salads and vinegar soaked beans accrued on the plate, with the right hand while carefully placing the paper tissue and the fork to the left of him. "Yes, Need for Food! Can't keep the taste buds under suppression for long." He said it matter of fact. "If you could call a plate full of leaves a treat for your taste buds, you're entitled to your feelings," chuckled Dirk in a wry sort of way, the visitor couldn't quite comprehend whether to consider it a joke and return the compliment with another flash of lower row or to say something to keep the conversation going. "But yoooou know, it's good. For you to discover the campus. Even if it means you need to hop across two intersections for this measly meal. I mean, rather than going to that basement cafeteria and brushing shoulders with the older lot of professors with borrowed Queen's English. You feel life here. How would you compare?"
"Ummm... naat musch difffferance", mouth full of potato slush and one little strand of sprout beans hanging, making desperate efforts to snake into the esophagal avenue towards the digestive innards of his mid-torso. Gulp... three-second pause of voice, accentuated with gestures and movement of left fingers to explain that it was difficult to think with food in mouth... clearance, "...actually, the food is same. But yes, it's a lot more warm here", and wondered if they both meant the same warmth. "Heeeey... Deee. Hi Canon, is the food treating you good?" the voice that had hailed Dirk from the back of the food chain a while back now settled down on the seat next to Dirk in the form of a gorgeous, even if slightly more round on the hips, E-cat, as Dirk affectionately called his girlfriend. Canon is how they had pronounced his name on the Round One of introductions as he had descended on the Teutonic soil, on the sunny but cold day in late September. Having a certain proclivity towards photography, he had mutely accepted his name-revision with a certain resigned candor that he prided himself as internal grandeur. E-cat is short for Ekaterina. As he mulled over nomenclatural predicaments in a university campus, D & E had quickly brushed their lips to acquaintance. That is something he was still coming to terms with. "Do you have your presentation this evening?" - Dirk.
"Naw! going to do window shopping at the mall. Going to leer and ogle at all those Aiwa Walkmans and try to beat the ascending steps of the escal..."
" 'k, join us at the 2nd Floor then? 6.30" E-cat suggested, afterwards looking at D for a late approval.
"Yeah!... yeah...!!" strained Dirk, perhaps taken unexpectedly by this invitation that must have ensued from him.
"What's up tonight?"
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Of course, dear Srini, I am aware. And I did visit the page. I am yet to comment. Will do so.
Give away isn't it? Oh yes, links I do. More than links. Have travelled, if not lived through the entire length and breadth of Deutschland. Of course, lived a lot there too! WV - deciz - Says anything?
I have always been an informal person. My style of writing should indicate that. Du bist wilkommen!
Oh, I was teaching an Introductory course in Indian Culture Studies and Indian Literature in English to students at an erstwhile East German University before I moved on to do my internship with a state theatre in the West.
Srini, thanks. *gush gush*
Well, am a slow developer. Hence I do a lot of narrative than plotting. In theatre parlance we call it expand than advance. Anyway, these days I don't have anything else but to comment and post comments as to do any creative writing takes a lot of energy and time, which i don't have for a while. I can't explain what this while is. Nevertheless I shall try and read your chapters. I am long due a longer transit on your and anand's blog. Shall soon do.
so is 'dee' the guy in the 1st chapter?
In fact, I am reading your novel from below, in the order you posted. 'D' is a very curious character. And, incidentally or strangely (I must say !) I have a mysterious character named just 'D' in one of my stories.
Curious start. I was mistaken that your story was going to begin in South-India. Deutscheland, is it? :)
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